CONCEPTS
out of the four concepts that we had within our group, two of them were chosen to be presented to the rest of the class. as a group, we decided what two concepts should be presented to the class based of the general story line and how easy it would be to film; we went with Philip and Sophie's concepts. after they had been presented to the class, a vote took place where the class were to choose between 'the bite down' and 'I hear you'. after that, we got feedback for both concepts on the positives and possible areas for improvement from the other four teams in our class.
CONCEPT #1
FEEDBACK
- the idea was well thought out
- good and relevant title
- the props and costume for the film trailer were well planned and suited the genre well
- the film trailer can easily be shot in college
- the costumes were logical
- the general idea is intriguing
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- the story line is very typical
- it looks like the story is based more around love than horror; more horror needs to be incorporated
- the story needs more development
- very similar to the 'twilight' movies which are not in the horror genre.
- the story line needs work
- cliche
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CONCEPT #2
positives:
- much easier to film than concept 1
- good story line
- the film title links well with the story
- good individual ending
- a very interesting background story
- great taglines
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negatives:
- the story needs a bit more development
- more characters and their descriptions needs to be included
- title needs more relevance
- the rape aspect needs to be reduced; perhaps beaten up to death or tortured
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and the winner is....
i hear you
Philip's concept got a total of 5 votes and Sophie's concept was voted the better of the two with a total of 9 votes.
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